Final+Paper

(The file above is an older version... don't use it!)

Hi Lisa and Chris, The latest draft (12/08/2010) will be up in a minute. It's called "Combined Final 670 Paper with Track Changes." I tried using Track Changes so you could see what big things I've suggested and what still could use a little refinement. There are a few specific questions for each of you, so please satisfy my information need with your brilliant answers. I'm still not happy with the conclusion, as you will see, and I haven't decided how to work out our section transitions. Also, something funky is going on with footnote 2 in particular. I hope it's not affecting any of the other ones. It's only showing one of the two lines of that footnote, and sometimes not even the first line. We are at about 6800 words, plus 1200 words in citations, bibliography, title page, etc. I've put in a title page and an honor pledge page as reminders, but they're definitely not final. I'm pretty tired and can't think of anything else, so take a look, send me some feedback, and we'll "talk" about this again tomorrow. Good night! Charlotte

Hello -

Below I posted another edition of the paper which includes my track comments, along with Charlotte's (I really just responded to her postings.) I think the paper looks great!! I have class this evening from 5:30-8:30 so I'll be unavailable during that time but I'll check my email as soon as I get home around 9, in case anything comes up. For the record though, feel free to change any part of what I wrote and/or the intro and conclusion - don't feel as though you have to wait for me to sign off on anything before you submit the paper! I trust both of you.

Hope you both have a lovely holiday break!! Hooray for being (almost) finished!! -Chris

Hi guys! I think it looks great. Charlotte your edits look good to me. I changed some of the things you suggested you can see them in my attached version with track changes below. I think it looks great and am confident in the changes. The conclusion was kind of awkward with a lot of repetition so I tried to weed it down a bit. Let me know what you think. My file ending in LMN is the combination of all our comments.